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Chas won a district award for his poem (Best Poem for 4 &5 grades) and read it at the awards ceremony!

 

 

Brown Fields

 

Brown fields of Reedley,
green leaves are coming out,
you can see little clusters of little grapes.

Grapes are ready for eating,
you can go out in the brown field
pick them and pop the sugar sweetness
right into your mouth.
Your mouth starts to drool,
sweet liquid drips down from your chin.

The leaves are of such brilliant colors
brown, red green.
The raisins drying
out in the hot hot hot sun,
on brown fields
on brown trays.

Trays of paper holding
bunches of grapes,
old faces, getting wrinkled
purplish brown sugar
to pop in your mouth.

Brown fields
covered with dead leaves,
chip chomp chomp on your feet.
Rot and blow away,
the vines are bare
with fog blankets.

The vines look dead
but really are alive,
waiting to be pruned
and pop out
with new leaves
in the sun, soft rains
and light green
California fields.

 

Poem written by Chas Grade 4
Poem inspired by In My Mother's House by Ann Nolan Clark
Alta Elementary School
Reedley, CA

-- May 2000

 

 

 


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